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My Idol
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ONE OF THE HANDSOME BOYS IN THE WORLD
Hi, I will tell you about my idol. I have some idols actually but I will tell you one of them. David James Archuleta is my idol or we known by David Archuleta. He was born on December 28, 1991 in Miami, Florida. He is twenty years old. He is a son from Jeff Archuleta, a jazz musician and Lupe Marie Archuleta, a dancer and singer from Honduras. He is one of American Idol 7th season finalist and he could win as a runner-up there.
David Archuleta has four siblings. They are Claudia (18), Daniel (14), Jazzy (11), and Amber (9). When he was six years, he and his family moved to Salt Lake Valley, Sandy, Utah. Now, he and his family live in Murray, Utah.
He began singing when he was six years old after he watched a video of the musical Miserables. When he was ten years, David sang for the first time in front of the public. He followed the singing competition of Utah and sang a song “I Will Always Love You” by Dolly Parton. He got a good response from the audiences and he won the Category of Children. Now, he is in beneath Jive Labels.
David has a cute face with a pointed nose and brown eyes. He has a good smile also. Besides, he has a light skin and short black hair. He is pretty tall. It is around 170 cm tall. He is in medium weight also.
A boy who has a cute face, has some hobbies. He really likes singing. That is absolutely because he is a singer. He likes reading a book also. I think he is a smart boy. I really respect with someone who loves reading a book. That is all I know about his hobbies.
In the future, I want to be a good person like David, even for me or for someone else. Although he is famous, he never forgot with his family. He is always friendly, easygoing, and modestly.
well, this is good essay...
BalasHapusI think you know much about him so I think you have explored your idea...
but I think you still can add more supporting details...
thanks...
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Hi Dewi,.
BalasHapusI think your essay is good,..
But, it's better for you to add the picture of your idol,..
I think that's it,.
So far so good,.
Just keep writing..
:)
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Thanks,..
@sabil: Thank you for your comment.
BalasHapusI'll add more supporting details on my next blog.
@giya: Thanks for your comment,too.
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it is a good essay...
BalasHapusbut be carful of choose the word...
"David James Archuleta is my idol or we known by David Archuleta."
i think it is better "David James Archuleta is my idol or we know him with David Archuleta"
but it is up to you...
keep writing...
:)
hi dewi,
BalasHapusI think you know much about him so I think you have explored your idea...
it is a good essay...
but be careful of choose the word...
keep writing :)