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Vacationing at Home or at Outside City
Holiday is coming soon. Everyone has a plane for their holiday. They try to choose the right place for spend their holiday. We do not want a bad holiday, do we? Everyone likes to spend their holiday at outside city than just stay at home. In this essay I will tell you about the advantages and disadvantages vacation at home or at outside city.
First, let us talk about vacation at home. Vacation at home sometimes really bored. We just stay at home and nothing special to do. Talk about the disadvantages first. Vacation at home we do the same activities such as watching TV or movie, has a barbecue party maybe and cleaning the house. Then, you cannot increase your experiences. But talk about the advantages, vacation at home you will not spend much money. Then, we can gather with all of our family. We can laugh together without afraid about the cost.
Second, let us talk about the advantages vacation at outside city. Vacation at outside city you can increase you experiences or you knowledge. Then, you can take a picture or visit interesting places there. But talk about the disadvantages, vacation at outside city you must prepare much money than vacation at home. There you pay for hotels or food. I think you must bring much money.
That is all about my opinion in vacation at home and vacation at outside city. According to me, vacation at home better than vacation at outside city. You should think first what the right place for you to spend your holiday or you will regret after that.
I think your Essay is very short ...
BalasHapusMy suggest is add more paragraph and Main idea ...
You should tell a lot about it ...
So far so god, that is All from me , thanks ...
it is a good essay...
BalasHapusbut, try to explain more differences between them...
don't just write advantages and disadvantages...
keep writing... :)
your essay is good enough but I think you can add more supporting details dewi..
BalasHapusbecause your essay still short...
from grammar side your essay is good..
thanks...
just revise it to make it perfect..
Hi dewi,
BalasHapusI think your Essay is very short...
your essay is good enough but I think you can add more supporting details dewi..
keep writing :)
dewi..
BalasHapusthis an interesting essay..
but, i cann't the picture. You should add a picture for you essay..
So far so good,.
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